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dazed
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since 2000-03-13
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0 posted 2000-03-15 05:49 AM


Deep in my mind I drift
searching and searching
through each thought, I sift

What i'm looking for I cant decide
maybe its something put away
something I hide

Im trying to find it,the reason,
the reason I cant sleep
it must be something, a thought to deep!!

Here it is I found it,
now let me look, ohh im full of worries
enough to write a book...

If I could stop my mind from wondering,
wondering a day ahead
I could ease all these worries
and maybe go to bed...


© Copyright 2000 Dana Wheeler - All Rights Reserved
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
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1 posted 2000-03-15 05:52 AM


this is great!! the poem that is
let the worries wash away...hope you sleep well

Bec

dazed
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2 posted 2000-03-15 06:07 AM


thanx bec I didnt think this was one of my better ones but oh well i was tired of being awake and bored hehehe 8o)
by the way could someone tell me how to do those smiley's
dana

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
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3 posted 2000-03-15 03:21 PM


Very nice poem. okay, the smiley faces  
just put in " " I'm not sure if that will come out as I typed it, so do a : fallowed by a )with no space. a winking face   is the same but witha ; rather than a : those are the only ones I know how to do.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


dazed
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4 posted 2000-03-15 10:15 PM


   ok just seeing if i know how
hope it works
thanx dragon

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5 posted 2000-03-15 10:45 PM


This is a great poem that I can relate to. I am often up late with my worries, and I hope that you can find peace soon!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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