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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
okay, a little note, i don't know what the hell i was doing or thinking when i wrote this. it is a little odd. Fire on water, Water on ice, Ice on land, Land under sky, Sky in clouds, Clouds of heaven, Heaven and Earth, Earth be known, For now and forever the elements here, Shall endevor forever. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
WOW I love it!!! I dont think its weird I think its creative!!! |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I love it! It's creative, and it's like, WOW! ~Kristi Lynn  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
well.... at least it is liked. I still think it odd, but hell, if you like it, who am I to call it odd? "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
It is well liked, so you can't call it odd- Only I can... J/K! ~Kristi Lynn |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
good job on this one, just like every other one  it's not odd at all, but even still, odd poetry is cool  |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
this was really cool i dont think i could have ever come up with anything remotly like it good job "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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