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how can i stop it
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how can i stop it |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
burning like fire burning like the sun burning like acid burning like my soul how can i stop it freezing like ice freezing like the wind freezing like artic water freezing like my soul how can i stop it warm like the pool water warm like the grass warm like a steam bath warm like a hug i finally stopped it you helped me stop it we stopped it thank you "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I like it. It is interesting and unique. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
Great poem! I loved it! Keep up the good work! ~Ashiraladoni " To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question." |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
I like your work!! you got a great mind!! This poem is cool cause it really i dunno its just creative!! |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is very creative and original  keep up the great work Bec |
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NewbiePoetGuy Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 13Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA |
hey, really good poem, it was definately unique i wish i had the creative mind you do anywayz good luck |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this poem, it's something different, original, and unique. Keep up the good work.  ~Kristi Lynn |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
good job!!! you are really a very talented writer |
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