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The chase (scarey poem please read and reply)
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The chase (scarey poem please read and reply) |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Sorry everyone but that read and reply grabs attention hehehe by the way in the poem.. its the grim reaper im referring to.. The Chase Running in the cemetery , she see's a terrible sight... Could it be?? It just might!! Scared stiff like a statue, She couldnt move her eyes, Her feet like bricks, There was nowhere to hide... Why was it hauvering above the ground?? It wasnt even making the slightest sound. Glaring at her with it's evil red eyes, Black cape wrapped around it , Sickle at its side She starts to run, The chase is on. It isnt far behind untill she's gone. That night the girl met her fate. PRE-WARNING...To all those who open the gate and walk through the cemetery just a little to late!! Dana Wheeler |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I liked the poem, although it is a creepy thought, especially when you live near a cemetery... (My Dad does, and I go to visit him sometimes...) ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Scary? Nah! A little creepy though. (should be working but can't help it). I like the poem. Oh, and as for as the pls read and reply, as people begin to know your name and to like your style and stuff, they will look for poems you've written. I do, just becuase I like your work. Anywho, very nice poem, reminds me of the mind set I have often time. Very often I should say. Anywho, maybe just one more before I leave again. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
I liked this creepy little poem. It was interesting, and cute at the same time. Keep up the good work!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
hey dragonfang, angel , and Oo .... thanx for taking the time tp reply.. and thanx for the info dragon you seem really cool |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
O yeah dragon fang I would be scared ****less if that ever happened to me hehehehe you are brave lol but walk passed a cemetery and tell me your imagination dont run wild...lol Love dana |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ack! as if i'm not scared enough to go into a cemetary now.....this is way creepy...but it has a whole 'scary halloween tale' feeling about! I LIKE IT! lol keep posting the great work Bec |
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