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dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

0 posted 2000-03-13 05:49 AM

i wrote this when i was a teenager and depressed
im over that now though hahaha
ROAD TO NOWHERE

It twists, It turns
in so many ways
with beautiful flowers and trees that sway

It looks so inviting, and smells of
flowers so sweet.I feel dirt...
A path under my feet.

Walking and walking the road to Nowhere.
I get a cold feeling a sudden scare!!
Does my family remember me? Will it last?
Or will I forever be trapped in this past?

A feeling of warmth, a feeling of love,
greeted with a quick push , a quick shove.
Am I in hell? Does anyone care? Or am I still walking the road to Nowhere?

I wake up in a terrible fright.
In my bed all snuggled in tight.

Dana Wheeler

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

1 posted 2000-03-13 07:02 AM

Hi everyone!! let me know what ya think of this poem even if its bad... 8o)

PEACEMAKER
Junior Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 19
Sydney N.S.W Australia

2 posted 2000-03-13 07:38 AM

i think i have been there before , wait im there now
the words fit perfect
great work

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-03-13 02:13 PM

Interesting perspective from a teenager. I guess there are time when it seems that were going nowhere. Just a little direction will usually get us back on course.
Nice write, I liked the form and rhyme.

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

4 posted 2000-03-13 04:33 PM

Ah, very nice poem. Don't know that I've ever been there before, I don't always know where I am or where I'm going, but I always know I'm somewhere and going someplace. Hope to see more from ye, tho I won't be on again for near enough a week.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

5 posted 2000-03-14 03:09 AM

A big thanx to those who have replied!! I appreciate it... and it makes me feel good that you liked my work...8o)

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

6 posted 2000-03-14 03:27 AM

i used to be on that road...but then i found a map and i am back on course

great post. i think this poem reflects what adolescents confront in descisions and life very well

Your depiction of 'walking the road to nowhere' was very creative.
good job

Bec

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

7 posted 2000-03-15 01:26 AM

Hey Bec thanx again for everything!!
love
dana

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