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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
For it is now my life is made complete, my heart is complete, my soul is complete, who would ever contimplate the way things worked out between you and I, my heart, and your heart, side to side, your soul and my soul, eye to eye, my love and your love, body and mind, I love you so, with all that flows through my veins, i love you so, through happiness and pain ******************************************************************* I love you mel |
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Looking-glass Junior Member
since 1999-10-26
Posts 10Singapore |
Nice poem. If the fourth line is shorter, it'll be even nicer. |
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Punk New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 3 |
Annon! Your poetry is awesome! you seem to be a great writer. im only 14 but so much of the emotions that u put into your poems i feel also. i think u r great, please keep writing! ~punk |
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
thankyou looking glass, and i'll keep that in mind thanx 2 u too punk, you are very welcome, and thanx for your support. Luv yas ANON |
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