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Lord, Why?
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
Hi everyone, this is my best and fav. poem i've written so far, and it is dedicated to all those out there who love someone soooo much that they could die, hope ya'l enjoy. Lord, why cant i have her? why cant i hold her and call her mine? will we be together, i pray every night? or my sins be to great to hold her in sight? Oh heart, why are you hurting me? why are you making my life a living misery? why send corrupt blood and pain through my body? why , you, my only source of strength, now show weakness, when its tash i’m always with? Dear soul, why am i so down? why cry invisable tears, and leave me motionless, whenever shes around? why hurt me soul, what have i done? Is it because I love her too much with my heart?and not as much with my soul? Dear tash, Is it you, who is making my heart break? Is it you, who makes my soul cry? why do you do this to me baby, why why why? My minds going crazy, that I cant explain but without an answer lord, I still suffer this pain. Lord she is my love, and I am hers, If I love her too much, would it make it better or worse? Or is our love a blessing, a legend, a myth a curse. ********************************************* I luv u tash. |
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Poetic Dreams Junior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 23Lindsa, OKlahoma United States |
This was a very good poem. Has she read it? If not I think she should. This poem is deep. Keep up the good work. ------------------ ~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~ |
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angel1004 New Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 8madison,tn usa |
wow! powerful and deep. i can feel the poem. tash should read this and redeem you from your pain. keep writing. it's a talent to you. |
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
well first of all, thanx so much you guys for reading this poem, it took me ages to write, and I'm glad that you guys appreciate it, esp u poetic dreams, youve been such the supporter in me, thankyou very much again (by the way, i'm not with tash any more, she left me) |
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