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Teen Poetry #2

net love: aint it kewl!!

ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

0 posted 1999-10-25 04:22 AM

every night weve talk so far,
i always wonder who you are.
Why do you make me feel so loved?
like a guiding star from up above,
you guide me through a sea of love.
The way you touch me with your words, and pay me out,
but when your sweet I begin to melt.
I know I'm hot, I know I'm cold,
but when its night, my love unfolds.
As serious as true a a mummies curse,
I'll love you Natasha for better for worse
I'll be your saviour, when you day goes bad,
and I'll always be there whether our angry or sad.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-10-26 11:28 PM

Wow...i wish someone would say something like that too me! great poem!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

2 posted 1999-10-27 01:38 AM

Good poem. I enjoyed it a lot.
I know part of the feelings attached, as the person I'm currently involved with I also met over the internet, however, she's within driving distance, so I did get to see her last weekend.
Anyway, I'm rambling on on my personal life now. Good work, keep it up.

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"I went into the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front the essential facts of life, and to see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I never lived." -Henry David Thoreau
"All comedians want to be rock stars, because they're cool. They always look like they're about to vomit." -Dana Carvey

Poetic Dreams
Junior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 23
Lindsa, OKlahoma United States

3 posted 1999-10-27 01:33 PM

Anon this is very sweet. You are a deep person. Keep up the good work. Ohh has she seen it? lol!!! Since I know you know how to post now...you better tell me.

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~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~

ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

4 posted 1999-10-28 12:26 PM

thanx a lot ppl, esp you poetic dreams, thanx for your help and support
ANON

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