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Teen Poetry #2
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Tara
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 76
Minnesota
0 posted 2000-03-13 05:31 PM


My heart is filled with nothing
Engulfing all my soul
My eyes just look around me
And try to make me whole

My mouth longs for your kiss
And fills my head with pain
My hands tremble before me
Only trying to stay sane

I listen for your footsteps
And smell for your sweet scent
My feet walk on without me
Not knowing where I went
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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-13 06:11 PM

This is nice poetry.  Nice style and rhyme.
Well done.
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238
2 posted 2000-03-14 04:15 AM

wow
this is quite heavy i like!!


keep up the great posts
Bec
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