Teen Poetry #2 |
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star night |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
i held you in my arms and yet we were so much closer it was one of the few times when we could be alone together we looked to the stars glimmering you were cold and couldnt stop shivering i held you to my cheast to keep you warm i did my best we had some laughs but we had to leave we had been there an hour and a half the thought of you leaving made my heart heave i dropped you off and sai good-bye on the way home i wanted to cry i knew it would be another week until we got to look at the stars cheek to cheek "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
oh...this is so beautiful...but at the same time so sad. i don't think anybody really likes the end of happy things. keep up the good work ![]() Bec |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
thats soooooo cute! Well done, i hate leaving people i love too ![]() Mel |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
This is such a good poem! I love it! Keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you soon. ~Kristi Lynn |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
very well done ![]() ![]() |
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