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The Comforter |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I see a comforter before me. Who is dhe I wonder? Who is this being with such love and devotation to her friends that she will do what she can to help. From giving a shoulder to cry on, To takeing punishment for her friends. This is who I see in the comforter. Do you see a spoiled little brat with smart-ellect remarks everytime she speaks. Maybe but this just makes her cuter. To the mother of the comforter be very proud of what God gave you. Even though when she tests you pancience which is all the time just remember that singing sweetheart that is on the viedo tape that you found. She had grown-up alot scence then. Now see is this aroney little girl I see before me. I am proud to know you, See you are special you manged to get through her childhood without pulling you hair out. You are a great mother honestly I am a proud man to know you. right now I am going to try to explain my comforter to you. In her eyes you can find peace, Becuase her eyes have a way of hypotising you. The face of the comforter is that of a angel fallen from heaven because she decided to stay and blend in with humans. Her body is hers and hers only until one day a worthy man come along to claim it with love in his heart for her. Her heart is like Jesus's, Always open to the hurting, the unwanted, and the lost. This is how I meet her for the first time and she changed my life forever. I will never be able to tell what excatly she did to me. But she just awakened some hidden powers inside of me. She taught me her way and I shared her mine. She taught me that a good friend sometimes makes diffcult desicions but just be strong and hold on to the love inside. I am a proud man that I taught her something to, I taught her how to see people for who they really are not by how cute or sexy they are I told her look deeper look into their heart and she what kind of man or woman they are. Now the circle is complete time to rest for the comforter. But how will fight she asks? I say "I will as a proof of honor I will fight for you". So I started fighting. I have been fighting a war in my heart for to long while she heals her wounds. See while I fight I give her strenght too. She gave strenght when I needed it so I am giving mine because she needs it now. As long as I have her by my side I will fight. She is my strenght. So by now you might of guessed it the comforter is none other than my dearist friend and hopefully soon to be girlfriend melinda The Phamtom Poet Michael Jay Vaughn |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Another good poem. I wish you luck with Melinda. I felt like you described me in that poem, honestly, until the last few lines. I've always been there for everyone, tried to help them, and I'm more of a pain than anything when I'm with my friends and family. Thank you for writing this poem, even though it's for Melinda, it still hits home for me...  ~Kristi Lynn |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Thankyou for your kindness and just belive in your heart it is adressed to you if you do this it will make you stronger The Phamtom Poet Michael Jay Vaughn |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
*BIG SMILE* Thank you... You do the same... ~Kristi Lynn |
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