Angel looking after me....

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Teen Poetry #2

Angel looking after me....

huney_mel
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 52

0 posted 2000-03-13 01:56 AM

As i look into your eyes,
I dont know what i see,
Maybe your an angel,
Looking after me.
Your lips so smooth,
And beautiful brown hair,
Great white teeth,
And a smile thats rare.
Great personalty,
And romantic too,
Thats why i dont wonder,
Why i love you.
As i take your roses,
You willingly give to me,
I'm glad that when i open my eyes,
Its you that i see.

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

1 posted 2000-03-13 06:08 AM

good poem!!

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-13 06:24 PM

Hope the fragrance stays fresh in those roses for a long time.
Nice poem.

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-03-14 11:01 AM

Cute poem, and so much love involved...
I like it a lot.
~Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

4 posted 2000-03-14 05:55 PM

Another great poem. You know, this place is distracting

hehe, oh well. Guess I'll have to live with it. Once again, great poem, I like.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

5 posted 2000-03-14 06:28 PM

Thie was very sweet, short and to the point. I really liked this one ALOT. Keep up the good work!

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

6 posted 2000-03-15 09:24 AM

Mel,
Yet again...I really like this poem!

~Sarah

huney_mel
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 52

7 posted 2000-03-16 03:21 AM

thanx

i really appriciate it when people reply, it makes you feel soooo good. everyone who looks at this is a great poet too, it doesnt matter how you write your poet, and how good it is, its the passion you have for it. If you dont have passion, poetry wouldnt be so powerful like it is or like we make it! Poetry has a power towards me like i cant explain, i respect and admire it.

Everyone keep up the good work!

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