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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-13 12:28 PM


you made my heart shine again,
like no no one else can,
I miss you so much and I can't see you gone,
you may be gone forever and that's too long,
I wear a shirt of yours that I cherish,
To hold you again is my only wish,
To kiss you again would be my heaven,
and be happier than I have ever been,
I am longing to feel your arms around me,
and love me forever and be meant to be,
And tell me that I'm so beautiful,
And amazing and he wants to know my soul,
These words he has spoken to me before,
It made me fall farther and feel more,
I just wish this would all be a dream,
And make you still be here with me,
You promised you'd miss me too,
If you only knew that I love you,
I will come visit you whenever I can,
Because you know you are still my man.

This poem is about Jasper. He is in jail right now and I miss him so much. My life as been nothing but hell and he came around and brightened my world. I love you Jasper!,but if he only knew it.  
  
~JeNnYeMeShAn~

  



 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-13 01:02 AM


i hope everything works out with you and Jasper. it's obvious and quite clear about the way in which you feel towards each other.
what is that expression.....
"love conquers all" ?

great poem

Bec

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-03-13 08:55 AM


He's great and I really love him but I don't know if he loves me. Jasper is really sweet and I"ve been looking for someone like him for a long time and just when I find him. I lose him, but thank you for the kind words, 4eva_at_heart. You made me smile  
~JeNnYeMeShAn~  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-13 09:42 AM


Jennye~
I'm soooo sorry that Jasper is in jail right now.  I'm here for ya chica!  Just take Bec's words into consideration- Love Conquers All.  She's right, ya know.  Nate told me he loved me on Friday, and after all that people did to try and stop our relationship, I can tell you from experience that it does.  
~Kristi Lynn

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-03-14 11:40 AM


I had a big fit yuesterday about Jasper and I feel really bad that he is gone adn I miss him so much. I'm happy that Nate said he loved you. I just wish I could say the same.
~JeNnYeMeShAn~  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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