|Teen Poetry #2|
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since 2000-02-25Posts 11
My life is a ball of fire, being tossed around.
I am in my own dreams, falling to the ground.
My life is a bird flying through the sky.
I am in my own dreams, seeing myself pass by.
My life is a butterfly, fluttering about.
I am in my own dreams, not seeing any doubts.
My life is an ant, roaming the grounds.
I am in my own dreams, playing around.
My life is a large bus, traveling about.
I am in my own dreams, seeking myself out.
Please give me a chance, let me speak.
I need to say something, I am getting weak.
Please give me a ride, let me see.
I need to see the world, that lay before me.
Please give me a book, let me read.
I need to realize the gift, the Lord gave me.
Please give me a laddar, let me climb.
I need every rung, I'll make it this time.
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since 2000-02-12Posts 238
wow! i really like this! like this heaps!
this i really great and full of expression! i like the way in which you've gone about writing this...great structure
please continue writing so i can continue reading and enjoying
since 2000-03-09Posts 522
I would just like to say that this is beautiful. I SO like that poem. Very nice, very very nice I must say. Just . . . wow.
"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.
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