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'unreliable' is my middle name
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'unreliable' is my middle name |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i like to be alone spending time with me, myself and i at home the family has gone away my dependence has frayed i am now so inconceivably free i can sit here and just be who i am...me i'm responsible, you can count on me to go out and take the house key but i left the iron on and the windows ajar and i didn't realise till i was too far no turning back to fix the dilemma i spent the night in a nervous tremor stressing that the house would burn down i could do little to erase the frown man would mum be pissed off if she returned home and everything was lost lost in a pile of ashes and mess i'm pretty sure she wouldn't be impressed i sat and questioned the reliability of our windows no one could get true them, then i froze crap! did i even put the deadlock on the front door? oh god! i left my extra money on the floor! i beg you dear house, please don't get robbed burgalars, can't you just skip this easy job? perspiring i am, bugging out like all hell i tell my friend, her response a simple 'oh well' oh well?!?!yeah...sure my parents would say that i don't think they would approve and make small chit chat dead i would be, as dead as they come breathing i won't be, not even some i think i've endured the punishment enough spending the night in a constant panick was rough too much responsibility for me to fight too hard to lock the house up secure and tight ack! i want my family back! no more will i continue this act i need them here, i utter in a voice so calm and soft i can rely on them to turn the power off foolish me, i have more to lose than gain being by yourself is such a damn hard strain  i went out the other night, family was away....and i like left the house open for anyone to walk off the street! i will never do it again!! i was so stressing that my parents were gonna return home to an empty house or no house at all lol[This message has been edited by 4eva_at_heart (edited 03-12-2000).] |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah, that is a cool poem. Musta sucked, that. I left the back door unlocked once and when I got home from the movies I realized what I did and freaked. For the next hour and a half I was running around the house to make sure that everything was still there. heheh  "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
nice poem bec....however it is only possible you that would do that (stress out and nearly have a cardiac arrest) and only jane that wuold say oh well. nice poem though all the same. EJ |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
hey beckna, thats so funny, and so like you....good useage of words and rymes, gotta love ya! Love always Melly XOX |
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