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LunarFlame
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since 2000-03-12
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Nova scotia, Canada

0 posted 2000-03-12 10:22 PM


Come with me
come to my land
of cotton candy clouds
and pixie stick sands

Soda pop lakes
and peppermint stars
with a cinnamon sun
that is watched from afar

The summers are warm
and it rains lemonade
in winter it snows ice cream
as the will seasons fade

So come with me
come to my land
of cotton candy clouds
and pixie stick sands

We'll dream sweet wishes
and make them come true
in a land of sweetness
made for me and u

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Leeman - All Rights Reserved
LunarFlame
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since 2000-03-12
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Nova scotia, Canada
1 posted 2000-03-12 10:24 PM


whoops! sorry for the double post guys!
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-03-12 11:25 PM


this is really sweet......literally
i like the whole fantasy land concept

Bec

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