can ya help me think of a title?

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Teen Poetry #2

can ya help me think of a title?

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-19 08:20 PM

He was always there,
Then he disappeared.

Now that I need him most,
Hes gone and I'm lost.

I can't find myself,
How can he find me?

I have no one to count on,
Can't even count on myself.

Maybe I shouldn’t have,
Told him how I felt.

He disappeared soon after,
He is unable to care.

I need him most now,
But I can't find him.

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DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

1 posted 2000-03-20 12:59 PM

very nice poem, I like it.
A title, how about, "When I need you." "When I need him" "Need" or something along those lines.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2000-03-20 03:16 AM

A touching poem here. This is a poem that you can relate to. But don't ever feel bad for telling someone how you feel because if they can't hack it, then they aren't worth it in the first place.

I am totally pathetic of thinking up titles for poems so I really can't help you. Sorry.

~AF~

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