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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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help me out w/a title please |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
children dying people crying what is this world coming to? babies lives stopped by knives where did we go wrong? wives cheating husbands beating what is this world coming to? God's forsaken lives are taken where did we go wrong? |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
oh wow.... I love the construction of the poem.... but at the same time it just makes me want to cry... As to a title, well I've never been very good at titles, but how about something simple, a one word question such as "Why?" or perhaps an emotion that is fitting to the poem, like "Despair" that is all I can really help you with, why do these always come up when I'm half alseep?? |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
i agree with dragonfang why would be an exclent title nice job |
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