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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2000-03-11 01:32 AM

I can't believe you let me sit here and tear my own heart apart.
Here I was, thinking,"Dear God, what have I done to the man I loved?"
I thought I was a terrible person,
deserting you the way I did.
But now I find out you lied to me.
You lied to me.
How could I have been so naive?
I trusted you, I believed you, and what do you do?
You lie to me.
You let me think that I was an awful person,
that I didn't deserve you.
Well I tell you what.
You don't deserve me.
I can't believe you lied.
You don't know how terrlbly this hurts me.
I thought we had a good, honest realationship.
I thought you were wonderful.
I believed you actually cared about me.
Well if you did, you ever would have lied.
I'm not an awful, terrible person.
You are.

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
1 posted 2000-03-11 01:46 AM

being lied to has to be one of the worst felings in the world  im sorry you had to go through it but at least you did find out instead of believing a lie  i hope that was a little helpful  good poem anyway though
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-11 01:51 AM

Ah, the betrayal of a trusted friend. Yes, that has to be the worst feeling in the world. I wonder, does it help you to write poetry when you are feeling down? It does for me, but I was wondering if other people felf the same way. It is a great emotional release for me.
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
3 posted 2000-03-11 01:53 AM

wonderful poem -- poetry serves as such a good release, doesn't it? anyway - that sux that you were lied to! i know what it's like to feel guilty and feel that you've been the 'bad' person...but i don't think i was lied to, then again, we rarely do. well, i'm not making much sense am i? that's what you get when it's 2am  
   -- pharon --

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