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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
where have i gone? you're no longer beside me. i need your guiding hand leading me day by day. You showed me how to love and i gave you my heart. I said i'd never leave your side now look how far i've run why did i leave you? i still need you beside me. i want your guiding hand leading me day by day. I gave you all my life And you showed my your ways. How complete i was in you I needed nothing else. please take me back! hold me close beside you. please be my guiding hand leading me day by day |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Pharon~ Another good poem~ another one I can relate to. I've felt this way a couple of times. Keep up the good work... ~Kristi Lynn  |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
This is wonderful! A title here should be easy Guiding Hand It is so hard sometimes in this world that wants us to conform to it when we want to conform to him. Spiritual maintenance can only be done day by day. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
I said i'd never leave your side now look how far i've run Wow. That hit the spot. I can completely relate to this poem and especially that line. Lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Day by Day could be a good title, too. but remember, some of the best poems are left untitled. The choice is yours. sweet poem |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
for some reason i missed htis one till now i agree with Astraea that line is very very good i wish i had read it earlier |
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