|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-01-24Posts 67
Don't you know the player's game
Can't you tell we're all the same
You tell me how much we care
Don't you know I'm also there
Filling hearts with all sorts of lies
Leaving them without good-byes
I thought that we could have had more
But in love I've been before
I don't want to take the risks
I am through with all the tricks
That love has played on my mind
I can't leave that hurt behind.
Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore
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since 1999-11-09Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
Very nice, though I think the talent you have was a bit faded when your thoughts seemed a bit scattered though I suppose I could just be interpreting it wrong. Good poem.
"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."
"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."
since 2000-02-21Posts 76
i really liked your poem. i can really relate to the hurt that you (if it's about you) are feeling. hope to read more from you.
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