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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
Don't you know the player's game Can't you tell we're all the same You tell me how much we care Don't you know I'm also there Filling hearts with all sorts of lies Leaving them without good-byes I thought that we could have had more But in love I've been before I don't want to take the risks I am through with all the tricks That love has played on my mind I can't leave that hurt behind. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice, though I think the talent you have was a bit faded when your thoughts seemed a bit scattered though I suppose I could just be interpreting it wrong.  Good poem.~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
i really liked your poem. i can really relate to the hurt that you (if it's about you) are feeling. hope to read more from you. |
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