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Betrayal |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Written down, It’s easier. One last goodbye, Its final this tyme. I'm doing this for myself, To prevent anymore pain. I care for myself, More than I do you. Selfish, maybe, But I don’t care. A friend I thought, Betrayed I was. Now I stand here, With a black eye. You called me a friend, Now I wonder why. This is the last tyme, I will not forgive. All I ever tried to do, Was be a friend. Now I'm being punished, For what I'm not sure. I have now more to say, So now ill just leave. (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Nice, and if it is true, I'm sorry. I know how you feel, being betrayed by a friend is one of the worst things that can happen, unfortunately I know how it feels. The universal language Poetry may be We read a poem And we understand Exactly how you feel We read the poem and say "How nice" "Beautiful, well written, and oh how nice." We understand how the author feels And can compare with our own I understand what your saying In this thing we call a poem. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Many people, including myself, have gone through this in one form or another. This was written with great honesty and it shows that you care enough about yourself to walk away from something bad. Great work, Tamma. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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k4u247 New Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 4warrenton,va,us |
i know exactly how you feel. my best friend had done this to me, but over time i forgave. it was never the same though.you get through it |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
*bump* |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Life has its disappointments, but we journey on because no one person or a hundred should blind us to the beauty that is to be found if we continue searching for the one who will not disappoint. and now, back to the top you go. |
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