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just a dream?
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just a dream? |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
sometimes i wake up to find that my life is nothing more than a dream. a flash of calm before the storm. i can't help but wonder when my dreams will come true. why is it, when i wake up, i'm missing you? are you nothing but a figment of my imagination, sent to torment me and bring me farther from reality? why do you disappear when i wake up? do i erase you, or were you ever real? yes, you were real. no dream has ever held me like that! i wake up thinking of you, then you disappear again. -- pharon -- |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
I enjoyed your poem very much. I think because I can relate to it so much. I think you did a great job here and keep up the good work. Gina |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Another good poem, Pharon. This one is one of my favorites, so far. I hope to see more soon. ~Kristi Lynn |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
I must agree with sunshine this one hits a little to close to home you put so much of yourself into this one good job |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
emptyness -- thanx for responding -- can't wait to see some of YOUR stuff  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
You know, it's very stange, that pretty poem you have there fits nicely next to one of mine. Consider it a consolation, it's called The dreams will come. I hope you read it next time your on the block. |
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