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jytree
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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-03-06 11:48 AM


What is inside me?
Who wants to know?
well I will tell you now!!
The courage of a lion!.
The strength of a bear.
Yet so unawear of what I am.
Speed of a cheeta!.
Fury of a lepoard.
I am courious as a new born.
Nice as a mother.
understanding of a lion
I am a strong, proud, nice, careing, man
I will be here.

But not to scare you a have the heart of a lover and it can be canged into a heart of a mercnary.




 The Phamtom Poet
Michael Jay
Vaughn

© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-06 12:40 PM


Nice poem jytree!  Good expression.
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-03-06 12:46 PM


good job
keep up the good work


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-06 03:54 PM


Very good poem.  Something that describes you is something that isn't seen very much in the forums.  Some people say what they feel, but who they are is still hidden...
~Kristi Lynn

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-03-06 04:47 PM


Great poem jytree....

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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