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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-03-03 09:28 AM


Everyday
I can't wait
To see your face
Or your smile

Everyday
I can't wait
To hear your voice
Or your laugh

Everyday
I can see
How much you're beginning
To mean to me

Everyday
We come closer
Like two strangers
Who know each other

What I mean
When I say this is
We are so alike
And we just met

Everyday
My feelings grow
I can't help it
I know how I feel

Everyday
You manage to say
Something..anything
To make me smile

Everyday
I see you there
Just waking up
And I realize...

This is how
It will always be
I always knew
I would be with you

As I told you
For better or worse
When you slipped
This ring on my hand


This is for a guy I have met..we have so much in common! The last few verses are like verses of things to come...I think he wants to marry me once we get to know each other better

stay cool

~~Lavada~~


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


© Copyright 2000 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-03-03 09:46 AM


Lavada~
I wish you the best of luck with your new man...  I hope things work out the way you want them to.  So far things between Nate and I are working out really well.  E-mail me sometime, and tell me about him...
~Kristi Lynn    

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-03-03 11:28 AM


Thanks Kristi, you always seem to manage to reply to all my poems..thanks for being a friend..wish me luck!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

p.s. His name is Rick  

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-03 11:59 AM


Sounds like love in bloom.  Hope it works out for you.  
Nice poem.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
4 posted 2000-03-03 12:04 PM


Thanks Danny I hope it is!


stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
5 posted 2000-03-03 02:03 PM


GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR NEW MAN, LAVADA!  I MEAN RICK!!!!  
~Kristi Lynn    

P.S.  Wish me luck with Nate....?

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