|Teen Poetry #2|
|You made it go away|
since 1999-12-23Posts 35
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Loniless and sadness slowly begins to creep
Out of this heart that ache so deep.
You open a door to my soul,
A part that felt so cold, now feels love and whole.
You did this to ne,
Can't you see, this is how it's got to be?
God had ment for us to be togethor,
Except things as they are, you and me are the future,
Me and you are forever.</font></div><!signature-->
<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> ~¤Always look to the
sunrise and you'll never
see the shadows¤~Anee
[This message has been edited by PoeticDreams (edited 03-03-2000).]
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since 1999-09-26Posts 2621
Well done Dreams. I definately see your poetry evolving. There are a few typo's in this but over all very good work.
since 2000-01-14Posts 478
Good job... Hope to see more from you soon.
since 2000-01-20Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
That's a really good poem. I look forward to reading more form you.
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