Teen Poetry #2 |
You made it go away |
PoeticDreams Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 35Lindsay,Oklahoma US |
<div align="Center"><font face="Times New Roman, Arial, Verdana" color="#8e236b" size="2"> Loniless and sadness slowly begins to creep Out of this heart that ache so deep. You open a door to my soul, A part that felt so cold, now feels love and whole. You did this to ne, Can't you see, this is how it's got to be? God had ment for us to be togethor, Except things as they are, you and me are the future, Me and you are forever.</font></div><!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> ~¤Always look to the sunrise and you'll never see the shadows¤~Anee Frank</font> [This message has been edited by PoeticDreams (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Well done Dreams. I definately see your poetry evolving. There are a few typo's in this but over all very good work. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Good job... Hope to see more from you soon. |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
That's a really good poem. I look forward to reading more form you. |
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