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PoeticDreams
Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 35
Lindsay,Oklahoma US

0 posted 2000-03-02 05:08 PM


<div align="Center"><font face="Times New Roman, Arial, Verdana" color="#8e236b" size="2">

Loniless and sadness slowly begins to creep
Out of this heart that ache so deep.
You open a door to my soul,
A part that felt so cold, now feels love and whole.
You did this to ne,
Can't you see, this is how it's got to be?
God had ment for us to be togethor,
Except things as they are, you and me are the future,
Me and you are forever.</font></div><!signature-->

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> ~¤Always look to the
sunrise and you'll never
see the shadows¤~Anee
Frank</font>

[This message has been edited by PoeticDreams (edited 03-03-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Elisha Bennett - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-03-02 09:12 PM


Well done Dreams. I definately see your poetry evolving.   There are a few typo's in this but over all very good work.
angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-03-03 10:27 AM


Good job...  Hope to see more from you soon.
sunshine17
Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
3 posted 2000-03-03 12:42 PM


That's a really good poem.  I look forward to reading more form you.
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