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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Come on down and pay your dues To the good ole red, white and blue Come say hi to Uncle Sam In your words, He's the man Come on now, respect the system Its full of morals, God, and wisdom Your Ma's and Pa's can pay the taxes And we'll whip out our battle axes We love welfare, Medicare, love to share Homeless, old, and poor, Help 'em all, we don't care (As long as we get our 10% in our pockets) C'mon kiddies, gather 'round where flags and eagles can be found Everybody listen here Don't you fret, don't you fear We,ve got it all under control buried in a deep, deep hole Come on down for the cure If you're normal, we'll help for sure If your weird don't even bother up and down, colder, hotter Thats the way the trends go Ya gotta keep up with the times, don't ya know? Oh now look it's Britney Spears Wish I could be just like that little dear Hey it's the Backstreet Boys If only Nick would be my toy... (Sigh) American mentality Be popualar and pretty Then you'll go somewhere in life So come on kids, pay your dues To the good ole red, white, and blue ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Oh so true! (Although I could've went all day w/o hearing the names Britney Spears and Backstreet Boys!!!) Very good work...! |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
DIDNT YOU POST THIS BEFORE.LOL. again it was great to read.(FOR THE 3rd TIME) ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Piggy New Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 5Belleville, IL, USA |
OHH it is so true it is wonderful how you can put all of that into to words and make it sound so great. You really have a talent-keep writting!! ------------------ **The only man worth your tears will never make you cry!!** |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I can't stand Britney Spears OR the Backstreet Boys. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
this seemed a little different. Is my memory changing what I read or did you make changes to this poem? ------------------ "I went into the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front the essential facts of life, and to see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I never lived." -Henry David Thoreau "All comedians want to be rock stars, because they're cool. They always look like they're about to vomit." -Dana Carvey |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
No, I didn't change anything. Thanks everyone, for replies. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
Ah, okay, well, I posted all kinds of praise for it the first time, I still like it, I'll leave it at that since I wrote massive essays on it last time :P ------------------ "I went into the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front the essential facts of life, and to see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I never lived." -Henry David Thoreau "All comedians want to be rock stars, because they're cool. They always look like they're about to vomit." -Dana Carvey |
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