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The Heartache I feel
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The Heartache I feel |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
The only thing I sense- the hurt you've caused me, the heartache I feel. I walk in a daze, not caring what I do, just trying to ignore the pain. I let my mind wander, but it keeps returning to you, and I keep reliving what I want to forget. I try not to listen, but I hear a song, and I think of you again. The heartache I feel, the pain you've caused, I wish I could ignore. ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
For some things there is only one cure.... Time. Take care and weather this, for the sun will shine again and the past will be only a blur. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanks again, Danny. You know, even though I didn't jump totally into this relationship, it hurt more coming to an end than the last one I had for nearly 2 years. There is/was actually something special between us, but I don't know why it ended so soon... ~Kristi Lynn |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
When I read all these poems about how someone caused such heartache to someone else it makes me so sad because I have to live with the feeling, everyday that I did that to someone else. And even though i am so incredibly sorry it doesn't matter because that person doesn't understand. this poem was really good and I guess I actually enjoy reading stuff like this because somehow I think it'll make me feel better. I'm sorry that your relationship ended and i know it hurts but i hope the pain will go away soon. I really enjoy your poetry. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Tara~ Thanks for your reply. You know, I've hurt people, too, especially one of my ex-boyfriends, who I was with for nearly 2 years. I think that it's actually harder to deal with knowing that you hurt someone rather than actually being hurt. But that's just my personal opinion... ~Kristi Lynn |
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