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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-02-25 04:20 PM

Kindergarten was years ago,
When we used to play and dance.

Who knew the loves,
We’d have and lose?

Dances, pep rallies,
And football games.
These are the things,
I remember most.

This place has been home,
For so many years.

Now we must leave,
And follow our calling.

We all shall follow a path,
To which our future leads.
I’ll never forget the football games,
Dances, and everything between.

My heart has been won,
By the Class of 2001.

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-25-2000).]

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

1 posted 2000-02-25 08:18 PM

Cute wording. Keep it up!

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

2 posted 2000-02-27 08:08 PM

*bump*

Crystalina123
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

3 posted 2000-02-28 03:34 PM

Tamma,
I am of the class of 2000 but I must say your poem voices how I'm feeling about my impending graduation that is 3 months away.

"The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

4 posted 2000-02-29 09:25 AM

Tamma,

I graduated as a Class of 99' member, but I also wrote a poem about it! Isn't that cool?? I will post it when I can find it

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

5 posted 2000-02-29 05:10 PM

tamma: *heh* i couldn't stand high school (or most of the people in it), but i'm glad you had a good experience... this is a good poem... i dont understand the 2 stanza/ 4 stanza thing though... perhaps you should make them all couplets? or quartets?...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

6 posted 2000-03-01 10:47 AM

Nice poem. Life has passages, and we gracefully move from one stage to another, remembering the things that meant the most.
I hope your going to college. The higher education is important, and the personal experiences there are even more exciting than the ones your leaving behind.
Best wishes

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