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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Today Im bored and empty, for there is that feeling I need. That feeling is giving me this feeling, wish makes me want to stop breathing. I feel this way because Im empty inside, I desperately need to be bound with new love. To bad she wouldnt come to me, like a beautiful dove sent from the stars above. Maybe she has come to me, and I was to blinded by my goal. In fact I can feel her love now, she has definitely taken a toll. She that I speak of is full of life she always looks at me with caring eyes. She is the kind of girl that, makes you hate saying good-byes. "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Dean: This was a wonderful poem. It shows your emotions all too well. Keep up the good work, though. I like it a lot... ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is a nice poem. Your feelings are well expressed. |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Thanx alot guys!! I have been really busy and havent wrote any poetry so well I got on the computer and did!!! "I love who all are positive and who are all positive to me" "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Dear Dean, I think that a lot of people, including myself were impressed by your poem. It really showed what you were feeling. It's great to be able to read a poem like yours and feel like you understand to a certain degree what the poet was feeling when he/she wrote it. You can understand whether they were elated or felt like the world was closing in on them. I personally think that it's great when you can connect to a reader this way. Keep it up. Good Luck. AngelShell. |
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