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Misty
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-10-03 03:47 PM


A Wish For The Impossible


Fare father from above,
Please send someone down for me to love.
Kind and gentle, caring to,
Who's not afraid of saying I love you!
Nevertheless, make me the only girl he can see.
Defenatly always right there beside me.
Have him show me what love really is.
What's mine will be his,
And what's his will be mine!
But please father, bless our love not to be blind.
Leave old lovers in the past.
Make his soft loving kisses last.
Have him tender, yet hands that are strong.
Let the joyful nights together be long.
Words of sweet compassion.
Oh, Of course have him in the latest fashion!
So what im saying as I wish into the night time sky,
Make him a true, one woman guy!

©Misty

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Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
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1 posted 2000-03-02 11:20 AM


This has made me a little misty.
A wonderful prayer.
Nicely written!
Withou a doubt with a heart like yours,
combine with your Faith.
The Lord will Bless you with this request.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-03-02 11:40 AM


Nothing is impossible.  And your prayers may be answered.  However, don't count on the latest fashion.
Nice poem.

sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
3 posted 2000-03-02 12:46 PM


That's a really good poem.  I think you did a really good job.  It totally descrided how I feel right now for someone I was once with.
Keep up the good work.
Gina

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