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Teen Poetry #2

Always in my heart

AllenC
New Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 3

0 posted 2000-02-27 12:01 PM

Nowadays, Im not very strong
I always thought, the pain wouldnt last long

All the tiny pieces, of my heart
Are now falling more greatly apart

Through all the suffering, toils, and pain,
My feelings for you will never be slain

Even through all this, my feelings grew
The fact remains, I Love you

If you ever need help, I shall be the best of a friend
Because angel, your in my heart till the end

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2000-02-27 12:06 PM

Sad and moving work, Allen. I don't believe I've had a chance to welcome you, so welcome to Passions! This is exellent work, I look forward to more!

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-27 02:56 AM

Ahhhh.......this is so sweet! *sniff* Very nice and oh so touching. It says a lot although it's not too long. Keep up the great work and welcome to Passions!

Salma

"Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

Tara
Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 76
Minnesota

3 posted 2000-02-27 06:25 PM

this poem is really good. i can really relate to it and it almost made me cry. i hope to read more from you.

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

4 posted 2000-02-28 03:50 PM

This is a really good poem. I think that you did a really good job. I know how you feel because I feel the same exact way for my ex and I would do any and everything for him if only he asked. Whoever the girl is that you have written this about is lucky... i think you should give it to her if you haven't already. Keep up the great work.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2000-02-29 04:42 PM

Allen- you know ive loved all of your writing that ive seen, You dont deserve what she put you thru, you are a caring, sweet person, who doesnt deserve heartache

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

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