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since 2000-02-24
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0 posted 2000-02-28 04:02 PM

My life is empty
A never ending hole
I don’t understand it
I have no control
I will keep falling
Deeper and deeper
Closer to death
With in my hole
The hole I dig
With the anger I feel
The anger inside
The anger I keep
Hidden away
So no one will see
I will never let it out
It will stay locked away
With no way out

© Copyright 2000 Christopher Elliott - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-02-29 11:14 AM

I'm sorry about that's going on with you..I have been there before and I just wanted you to know that someone out here cares!  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-29 12:53 PM

I think Jennye is right.  Someone out there cares.  Life has it's ups and downs for everyone.  We keep going because there is always a promise of a better tomorrow if we only look for the good thats there.
Keep Looking and keep writing.  We here will be reading.

since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
3 posted 2000-02-29 03:49 PM

That is a really good poem.  I think you did a really good job.  Keep up the good work.
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
4 posted 2000-02-29 04:12 PM

You are a very talented poet, ya know...  I love your poems so far, and look forward to seeing more.  I love the fact that so far I can relate to them, even though I can't usually write them.  Writing is the easiest way to express your feelings, though, isn't it?  
Keep your chin up, 'cuz you know you got me here for ya.... Okay, that might be a scary thought, if you ask JennyeMeshan or Sunshine17, but at least you know I care.  Take care!
~Kristi Lynn    

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