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Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 2000-02-24 11:25 PM


I'm here for you
If you ever need to call
When everything hits you at once
And you feel like you're gonna fall

I'm here for you
If you ever need to cry
Just come and fnid me
I don't even need to know why

I'm here for you
If you ever need to talk
I can listen til the break of dawn
I promise I will not mock

I'm here for you
If you need a friend
And I promise I'll be here for you
At your side, until the very end.

© Copyright 2000 Sarah Goldstein - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-02-24 11:28 PM


This is a really touching poem. Good work.

~AF~

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
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2 posted 2000-02-25 12:24 PM


It is great to know that there is someone like yourself out there if anyone needs to talk. I applaud you on a job well done.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
3 posted 2000-02-25 09:51 AM


Thank you to you both!  

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
4 posted 2000-02-25 02:18 PM


I have to agree that it's good to know that there are still some people who care in this world.  Here in Passions is where I found some of the greatest people in the world, and people who would actually take the time to listen to what I have to say.  I applaud you on your poem, I loved it.

~kristi lynn    

sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
5 posted 2000-02-25 03:41 PM


That's a good poem.  Keep up the good work.
Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
6 posted 2000-02-25 04:12 PM


Thank you sunshine and angel!  I totally agree angel, that some of the most caring people I've met...reside right here at this forum.
~Sarah

Gadget28
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 33
Miami, Florida United States
7 posted 2000-02-25 07:30 PM


This is a beautiful poem!  It's so good to know that there are people would are "there for you" in your hardships and time of pain, I have encountered people who I thought were actually my friends until I was in time of need, (that's when you really know who your friends are!) If you'e read my poem, "Please Don't Hurt Me Any More!" you would probably understand where I'm coming from! Many hugs and kisses to you!
Sara
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since 2000-02-24
Posts 27
LaCrosse WI, United States
10 posted 2000-02-25 07:55 PM


I really enjoyed reading this poem.  I might show it to a friend of mine because things are a bit weird between us and I want her to know that I'm still there for her.  Great job.
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
11 posted 2000-02-25 08:06 PM


This is a very sweet poem. I wish I had more than just 2 friends that were actually willing to listen, and try to understand. How are things going with you, anyways? I don't know if you remember or not, but I told I can relate to your situation, so if you ever need to talk, I'm here for ya babe!   gitchi88itchi@aol.com

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
12 posted 2000-02-26 11:53 AM


Gadget-Thank you for all of your praise!  I did read your poem, and i understand where you're coming from.  Remember this poem applies to everyone in this forum.  I've been told I give excellent advice, so I'm here for the asking.  
Sara-Please, feel free to show this to a friend.  I orginally wrote it for a friend of mine who felt like she had no one to turn to.
Stephanie-Thanks!  I'm confused as to waht situation you could relate to though!     Thanks anyways.
~Sarah

peanogrl83
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 202

13 posted 2000-02-26 05:55 PM


Awwww! Sars! This is really sweet!!! You're an awesome friend, and you've always been there for me, so I can attest to this poem's validity from experience!!!! :.) :.)  I'm sure whoever it's written for will love it, too, Sars! Love ya, hun! :.)
                                     Vreni

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