Teen Poetry #2 |
I'm here for you |
Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
I'm here for you If you ever need to call When everything hits you at once And you feel like you're gonna fall I'm here for you If you ever need to cry Just come and fnid me I don't even need to know why I'm here for you If you ever need to talk I can listen til the break of dawn I promise I will not mock I'm here for you If you need a friend And I promise I'll be here for you At your side, until the very end. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really touching poem. Good work. ~AF~ |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
It is great to know that there is someone like yourself out there if anyone needs to talk. I applaud you on a job well done. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Thank you to you both! |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I have to agree that it's good to know that there are still some people who care in this world. Here in Passions is where I found some of the greatest people in the world, and people who would actually take the time to listen to what I have to say. I applaud you on your poem, I loved it. ~kristi lynn |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
That's a good poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Thank you sunshine and angel! I totally agree angel, that some of the most caring people I've met...reside right here at this forum. ~Sarah |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
This is a beautiful poem! It's so good to know that there are people would are "there for you" in your hardships and time of pain, I have encountered people who I thought were actually my friends until I was in time of need, (that's when you really know who your friends are!) If you'e read my poem, "Please Don't Hurt Me Any More!" you would probably understand where I'm coming from! Many hugs and kisses to you! |
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Sara Junior Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 27LaCrosse WI, United States |
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I might show it to a friend of mine because things are a bit weird between us and I want her to know that I'm still there for her. Great job. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This is a very sweet poem. I wish I had more than just 2 friends that were actually willing to listen, and try to understand. How are things going with you, anyways? I don't know if you remember or not, but I told I can relate to your situation, so if you ever need to talk, I'm here for ya babe! gitchi88itchi@aol.com (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Gadget-Thank you for all of your praise! I did read your poem, and i understand where you're coming from. Remember this poem applies to everyone in this forum. I've been told I give excellent advice, so I'm here for the asking. Sara-Please, feel free to show this to a friend. I orginally wrote it for a friend of mine who felt like she had no one to turn to. Stephanie-Thanks! I'm confused as to waht situation you could relate to though! Thanks anyways. ~Sarah |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Awwww! Sars! This is really sweet!!! You're an awesome friend, and you've always been there for me, so I can attest to this poem's validity from experience!!!! :.) :.) I'm sure whoever it's written for will love it, too, Sars! Love ya, hun! :.) Vreni |
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