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A Wish |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Just one kiss, Is all I wish. Just to know if we, Were ever meant to be. You stare into my eyes, Or is it just a disguise? Is it lust or something more, Tell me, are you keeping score? Love came out of nowhere, Now I know I must share. I love you, you know, A secret I can show. May I have my wish, From your lips a kiss? "In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all" -Me :) |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
I really like this poem!!! I totally know how you feel!! The poem also flows really well. Great work. Angela |
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Sara Junior Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 27LaCrosse WI, United States |
That is a great poem! I have felt like that and actually do right now. Nice job |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ah...such a common feeling everyone has. I too am having the same feeling right now. I met someone new and we have been se a lot of each other lately. I too wonder if it was meant to be! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
*bump* "In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all" -Me :) |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Have you read my mind or what?! My same exact feelings....great poem Tamma  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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