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Lost Love |
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AllenC New Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 3 |
From the first day I thought that I knew That you and me together could always be true Always in the past we stayed so very close Where are you now when I need you the most Never did I doubt that our love was so true Who is my Angel? I thought that I knew Through all the lies you told me you said we'd always have each other but know I find through the past few months you have had another On the supposive day of love where all happiness should be Instead of sharing the magic you say you want him over me Why did all this happen? I though our love could coast The one girl that I love ended up hurting me the most You tell me to be patient to just wait this all through After what you have done How could I ever retrust you Despite what Im feeling There is one thing that I see I just want you to be happy With or without me |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Allen- like i told you before, i love this poem, and it was a wonderful first post  i only hope you share your gift with us more often "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description." -Jaya Ballard, Task Mage |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to passions! Great poem, I know some about what you are talking about. Keep up the good work! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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-LeAnn- Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13San Antonio,TX |
all i gotz 2 say is…… WOW…… & GREAT POEM!!! hehe :> But i'm super tired :/ so, i just wanted 2 say that & stuff…… <~>PEACE<~> "Bounce 2 This…" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Hey Welcome to Passions!!! Great first post! I'd love to read more. Keep smilin'  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
It is a good poem, I'm just sorry your heart got broken in the process. I can't wait to read more. Welcome to passions! |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
*bump* |
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