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Sara Junior Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 27LaCrosse WI, United States |
My mind is spinning I'm so confused I thought I was winning But now I might lose I was over all the pain I was finally moving on But now things are not the same My happiness is gone You left me with my tears I thought I couldn't go on I was living my worst fear My life a hopeless song Now you're coming around As though everything is fine I hear that voice, that sound saying you must be mine My heart is still hurting From when you went away But now it is hurting Because you came back today |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
You write such good pomes! I really like your writing style, your poems flow together really well, and I just really like them. Great Job!! Angela |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
This was wonderful. The structure and meter were perfect. This poem couldn't have been any better. GREAT JOB! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Wonderful! I completely agree with Jer. Everything was perfect!  I am very impressed with your work thus far.~Sarah |
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