Teen Poetry #2 |
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Love is... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA ![]() |
Love is a rose that grows unveiled Love’s beautiful in all her forms Love is the crown made of thorns Love is a cross to which I’m nailed Love is a rose that grows in vain Love is the petals on the ground Maturing paciently and proud-- A cross that dangles on my chain |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exquisite and so lovely.. ![]() *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thankyou for the reminder of what true love is. And great wording. Way t'go!! "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Great poem man!!! Keep up the good work. "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you all! Glad you liked it! |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Beautifully said! (as always.. :.) ) Vreni |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Wonderful! I enjoyed once again... ~Sarah |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Another wonderful poem. I'm starting to look forward to more of your poems... ~Kristi Lynn ![]() |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
What a great poem. This one is definatlly gonna have to get printed out and given to my now ex boyfriend. It really is good. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is soooo beautiful Master! I really liked this one of yours. You should post more often really....great! Really great! Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Your description of love is so wonderful. It shows how love can be so lovely, yet it can also hurt at the same time. Great job Master as always. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Good job Master. I always love reading your work. Bravo ~AF~ |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This was very touching. There's so many meanings of love, and you wrote some of the beautiful ones. ![]() ps>I'm doing the same thing as Sunshine17 did. Maybe my X will get it now, and stop throwing the word LOVE around. (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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