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Angela16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
USA

0 posted 2000-02-24 06:53 PM


All I ever did was think about you,
and now my dream is coming true.
You like me and I like you,
and I like the things we do.

When I am with you I feel whole,
you complete the missing part
of my heart.
I don't believe I've ever felt this way before,
I want to get to know you more.

I want to know every inch of you,
inside and out.
'Cause thats love is all about.


 Angela

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Sara
Junior Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 27
LaCrosse WI, United States
1 posted 2000-02-24 07:26 PM


I really like this poem.  I haven't had the feeling of being whole with someone for a long time.  I miss being in love.
Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
2 posted 2000-02-25 01:31 AM


Such a great feeling to be in love! If only I could find that one that completes me. All will happen in time. Thanks for sharing Angela.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

3 posted 2000-02-26 04:07 PM


I don't mean to be depressing or downcast, but sometimes this feeling fades. I wouldn't call it love just yet. But I wish you all the luck with your relationship, honey!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

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