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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

0 posted 2000-02-23 04:02 PM

Sitting here in class
I realize I'm daydreaming
about you again.

I'm picturing your arms,
holding me tight,
keeping me safe.

I keep hearing your voice,
telling me everything
will be all right.

I feel your lips on mine,
giving me the kiss
that promises your love.

I feel your hand take mine,
giving mine a little squeeze,
just to show affection.

Now I hear the bell,
disturbing my daydream,
only for me to have it again later.

~Kristi Lynn

for my current boyfriend, Nate, which is why it's been edited...

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-02-23 05:55 PM

Awwwww, how sweet! And also very down to earth. (in a wierd way?) Good job.

"The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 2000-02-23 10:53 PM

Indeed very sweet! And heartfelt too. I like this a lot.

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-02-24 09:31 AM

Well thank you for your replies, and I'm glad that it's sweet. I haven't given it to him yet, but soon, and I hope it's liked by him as much as by you...
~Kristi Lynn

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

4 posted 2000-02-24 09:33 AM

Congrats to Nate to have such a caring girlfriend..and congrats to you, for having such a caring boyfriend

stay cool angel

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

trevorskogsbergh
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since 2000-02-03

Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

5 posted 2000-02-24 07:49 PM

You know. I wish there were caring women like you over here in California. Everyone I meet is either full of themselves or just total crackheads. I'm just glad there are still caring people in this world. No matter how messed up it is right now.
Trevor

If you want to walk with God, you've got to go His way!

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
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6 posted 2000-02-25 02:03 PM

Thanks for your replies,
Trevor:  Don't worry, you'll find someone as caring as me, if not more so.  Just don't be looking for someone, let them find you.  That's how I found Nate.  I wish you luck, though.

Kristi Lynn

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

7 posted 2000-02-25 08:26 PM

This was a very sweet poem. I liked it alot. What sucks even worse is when you ARE a caring girl who doesn't get appreciated for the sweet things that they do, and say. I haven't found a caring guy YET. Anyway...keep up the good work!

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

8 posted 2000-02-28 09:35 AM

I can hardly believe it myself that I found such a caring guy- I hope all works out... I showed him this poem and another one I wrote for him when he came in to see me at work, and he almost cried right there, in front of everyone... He said no one has ever written poetry for him, and that he hopes to see everything I write for him. I hope everything means as much as these first 2...

~Kristi Lynn

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