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Tonights Tears |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Tonight I sat outside the store Crying on a bench He walked out the door With his hands in a clench He had called for his ride Not knowing I would come back I sat to the side While he turned with his pack He hugged me He told me not to cry He seemed worried and told me he loved me But all I could did was look and sigh He walked to the car I barried my face in my hands I can't take any of this anymore He still doesn't understand It's now been two hours I have not recieved any phone call I should buy myself flowers Then maybe I won't ball He's never not called after a fight at night I wonder what's going on his mind Is he alright? See I'm not as shelfish as you may find I just can't handle things I become too upset My heart pings When him and I have not met  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sad poem lots of emotion. Nice writing! Danny |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I identify with this poem so much it hurts. Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
*ECHO* Very sad poem Steph! full of emotion!stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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