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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

0 posted 2000-02-23 10:59 AM

Tonight I sat outside the store
Crying on a bench
He walked out the door
With his hands in a clench

He had called for his ride
Not knowing I would come back
I sat to the side
While he turned with his pack

He hugged me
He told me not to cry
He seemed worried and told me he loved me
But all I could did was look and sigh

He walked to the car
I barried my face in my hands
I can't take any of this anymore
He still doesn't understand

It's now been two hours
I have not recieved any phone call
I should buy myself flowers
Then maybe I won't ball

He's never not called after a fight at night
I wonder what's going on his mind
Is he alright?
See I'm not as shelfish as you may find

I just can't handle things
I become too upset
My heart pings
When him and I have not met

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-23 01:13 PM

Sad poem lots of emotion.  
Nice writing!

since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

2 posted 2000-02-23 02:21 PM

I identify with this poem so much it hurts.


 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all.

Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-02-23 02:39 PM

*ECHO* Very sad poem Steph!     full of emotion!

stay cool  


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-23-2000).]

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