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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
My last poem, This is it, I lost my will, No further grip, Reality sucks, so does my life, My shadow of myself has faded, I am no longer strong, This is the end my friends, The end as I am her thinking of things to come, I wonder? Will I live through this new torment only to find desolation!! will not my cry be heard? will I be stuck in this abolished life I hope and watch for a way out, Will my freedom ever come??? Will it come by God or by the hand of man? Is death my only freedom?? I will go on and try this is my only option But to die a sinful death I will live in worse torment Goodbye my friends!!.\ Well everybody a am done with potry for a while I hope you like what I did thank you for having me and listening Good by for now Your friend Michael Jay vaughn |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I'm sorry you're leaving. But why? If you don't mind me asking. Don't stop wrting...you've got talent and nothing's ever worth losing that passion over it. I hope you reconsider. Good luck! Salma |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
sniffles*  Why are u leavin jay? ur poetry is good!  ! so what's up? if i can ask that |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
jytree: sorry to see you go man... dont forget about all us pitiful-poets here though... you have to come back and visit us from time to time  as for the poem... i like the next to last line best... very interesting ideas you have there... but i refuse to believe that this will be your LAST poem... in fact, i'm certain it wont be... there's a prophecy for you (straight from the Mysterious Priest)...sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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poetic_butterfly Junior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 25illinois, usa |
i haven't been here that long, but don't leave! stay, this place isn't too bad. and jerome the melancholy priest, i love your signature (love the smashing pumpkins too) ....the words that stand still are often the ones that move us most.... |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
This "last poem" of your's is deeply intriguing. It reminds me of something, but I can't put my finger on it. I hope your life gets back on track. I always thought poetry was a way of dealing......but whatever path you choose to take, we'll always be here if you need to unload. Don't forget us jytree, we won't forget you! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
this is my last poem for awhile I need time for myself and others things you will here from me again I promise!! The phamtom poet jay |
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