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Teen Poetry #2

i'm trying honest i am

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

0 posted 2000-02-22 11:11 AM

it kills me not to be in your loving arms,
but i'm trying honest i am.

it kills me not to hear your words,
but i'm trying honest i am.

it kills me not to see a smile on your face
when i look at you,
but i'm trying honest i am.

it kills me not to feel your soft kiss,
but i'm trying honest i am.

it kills me not to say i love you,
but i'm trying honest i am.

i'm trying so hard that i can't get you
off my mind.
so please give me a sign that things will
work out and we'll be fine.

Gadget28
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 33
Miami, Florida United States

1 posted 2000-02-22 01:46 PM

I love this poem! It shows how much you care in this relationship or friendship! It was excellent

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

2 posted 2000-02-22 03:47 PM

Oh, Sunshine, I understand. I hope he realizes how you feel, and I hope he sees that it's killing you inside. I'm always here, and you know it. I know exactly how you feel...
~Kristi Lynn

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

3 posted 2000-02-22 03:57 PM

Thank you for the nice response. I wrote that poem for my now exboyfriend. I still care a lot for him even if it seems like I know longer exist to him. I just hope that things will either work out or that I'll be able to be his friend. Yet I still am really confused about the whole thing.

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

4 posted 2000-02-22 04:00 PM

Thanks Kristi I hope he and I will work everything out but only time will tell. And to tell you the truth I'm still not too sure about that. But thanks for everything. I really mean it, god only knows how sick and tired you must be of hearing the same old story over and over again.....so thanks!!

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