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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Ode to the Butt Look at his butt It is oh, so fine Could it ever possibly be Mine, all mine? I look everyday His great butt in tight jeans And it makes me yearn To see the rest of him He's my "southern gent" There is no other His butt is the best No one can compare When he walks He has such poise He knows how to walk the walk Its all about the butt No more, no less I dream every night How wonderful it would be I fi could have his butt It would make my life complete His butt is just, oh so fine. I will be sure to send any comments her way  "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description." -Jaya Ballard, Task Mage |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Well.......I'm personally not a big butt-lover, but I guess if I were I'd appreciate this.  "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
hmmm... just had to say "no comment"  Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
HEY! Tell your friend to stop looking at my butt and writing poems about it! LOL "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
i love this poem, of course i also kno whose butt shes talking about  "In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all" -Me :) |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Well seems your friends gotta a thing for butts  Tell her it's a nice poem, but butts aren't the hottest topic! No, it's a nice poem though!Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i'll have to be the rain on your parade and say i absolutely deplored the poem. sorry. it's content was sophomoric at best. of course i know it was probably meant to be a joke poem so i'll take it as it is. cool? rich-pa |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
rich pa: of course it was meant as a joke Meli writes alot better than i do..ill get her to let me borrow one of her better ones to post k? "In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all" -Me :) |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i was sure it was a joke. do that, i'ld love to read some of her serious works. rich-pa |
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