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Searching For My Angel
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Searching For My Angel |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I'm searching for my angel, the one who will lift me up, the one who will protect me. I'm searching for my angel, someone I can confide in, someone that I can trust. I'm searching for my angel, the one I am happy with, the one I can hold on to. I'm searching for my angel, who I hope will care for me, who I pray will love me. ~Kristi Lynn  Written 2-1-00 |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This poem is so sweet! I really like the title and you expressed your desires so well. That special "angel" is out there, but be on guard for those false angels who will tell you all the things you want to hear but if you look closely, they have no wings! The best to you. Your a good writer! Danny |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Danny~ Thank you for your reply, and for your compliment. I hope to find that special "angel" soon, but lately, all I've seen are the dark angels- the ones who want to hurt me... I'm sure one day I'll find my angel, but until then, I have to keep searching. ~Kristi Lynn |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Every single one of us in this world wants our "angel." It really stinks when you thought you found yours and then you lose all that you thought you had. Great work! Keep it up!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem that I can really relate to! Keep up the good work! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahhh... such a nice poem. I'm sure you will find your "angel" in time Kristi. God knows that you deserve one. I wish you the best of luck in your search. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanks all, for your replies. Sometimes I think I found my angel, only to discover that they don't really care or do something to prove me wrong... Jer: Thank you for what you had to say. It means a lot... ~Kristi Lynn |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
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