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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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What is a friend? |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
This is one of my very first poem attempts, it's not the best but i like it cause it started my writtings. so here it is What was, can be no more What could have been is now impossible The things I have waited for, for what seems like an eternity These things are now but a faded dream in the night Emotions that were strong and confusing recently depleted Are now brought to the light again Feelings that were thought hidden are now in my face screaming to me--why? All that my world was, has now come to a forseen, yet unexpected end The things that I held dear and secretive to me have now become an uncovered shadow Forever I will hold dear to me, your memory and constant voice in my head All you are and all you have given me--I will hold close to my heart and guard these memorys With my life, for that's all I have of you now Because you said Forever my friend "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
For your very first poem, this is pretty good. It's simple, but then that's part of it's charm.  "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Your first start was better than mine. My first poety is in a trash can somewhere. I like this poem a lot, and what better topic then friendship. Nicely written! Danny |
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