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Teen Poetry #2

Sounds So Good…

-LeAnn-
Junior Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 13
San Antonio,TX

0 posted 2000-02-20 01:52 AM

Better than love,
better than money,
better than the heavens above,oh, this just seems so funny,

i bet ur wondering what it is,
WHAT COULD IT BE?!!!?,
go ahead… be me… PLEEZ,
wait, i'll tell u… you'll see,

ok… i can't keep it from u,
this is what it is… i'm telling u,
u wanted 2 know… i'm giving u a clue,
just sit back & relax… ºWHEWº,

This is better than anything & everything else,
its not a matter of opinion… but a HARD CORE FACT,
this is true…… this is whats soo AMAZING……
<html><h1> !¡!~SLEEP-!¡! </h1></html>

{i'm soo tired…… BYE!! hehe}

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-02-21 01:10 PM

To be awake is to be alive!
This was a cute poem, but I was surprised at the end. Definitely not better than love or the heavens above.
Good imagination!
Danny

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