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Ophelia Speaks Junior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 11suburbia, IL |
I once met an angel named deception who whispered broken promises in my ears so I would live in her lies I once met an angel named vanity who lurked with a vengeance behind the faces she consumed in a morbid masquerade to take away all feeling of something real I once met an angel named ignorance not understanding things so simple unable to differentiate the dying from the living maybe just because she didnt want to see the truth. I once found the devil with an angel's face an angel who came to me in silent dreams saw my transparent secrets taunted my weaknesses gazed at me with those blue eyes drinking my salty tears like the blood of love's martyrs which now mingles with my own. I once found the devil with an angel's face but I couldn't tell the difference any more. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This was very well written. I like the expression and creativeness. Nice poem! Danny |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow....great poem!! Very interesting. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Just when I think I can be proud of what I write, someone comes along and writes a poem like this-much better than my pathetic attempts.......  You are truly talented, and I look forward to reading whatever else you have inside your head! "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
ophelia: yet another chillingly brilliant piece... i'm quite impressed and hope to see more of your work as i work up the line of the forum... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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