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What You Mean to me |
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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
What do i want...where to begin I wanna share my world and let you in All this time i been anticipating come on luv im thru with the waiting I've never cared and wanted someone as much as i do you How can i get my point thru? I miss the breath you breathe into my heart Without you here everything falls apart I don't know what else to say Just the thought of you brightens my darkest day When you hold me in your arms nothing else in this wolrd compares And when i feel your tender kiss I have no more bothers and no more cares I'm not gonna settle for no one... Unless that someone is you Have i gotten my point thru?? Your all i have left to hold onto Just gimme one chance... I won't disappoint you *dedicated to the only one i need....Edward 2-15-2000 |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
sensation: you must be very devoted to this edward to write something like this for him... i hope it all works out for the two of you  the poem itself is fairly well-written... not a whole lot of variance from some of the other love poems i've read, but better written than most of them... keep up the good work sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I'm sure this guy does mean a lot to you, that you were inspired to write such a passionate poem. Very nice. "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice poem. You have certainly expressed your devotion to that person. Have they read the poem???? Nice writing! Danny |
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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
yes i did show edward this poem...he loved it ...no one has ever wrote a poem for him and this is the second one i wrote for him...so he knows how special he is to me |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is such a sweet poem. It seems he means a lot to you. Wow! Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I see that he means a lot to you. I hope all stays well, and I hope he sees that he is so special to you. Keep up the good work. |
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