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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
You depressed me I thought no one could suppress me You crushed my heart in the dirt This is why I am so very hurt Although, I do miss you very much I just need you gentle touch I have to keep you close and near Withou you I will feel nothing, but fear 2:33 AM*VAlentine's Day 2000 (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey girl, keep your chin up this Valentines' Day okay? I hope that everything works out for you. Very heart-felt poem.  "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Tight poem girly!! I can understand what your feeling. Anyways the only advise I have for you is baby girl keep your head up!!! Keep up the good work! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I've been going through the exact same thing, and after a while you'll begin to wonder what you needed them so much for.I hope things will get better. Guys don't often realize how much they hurt us, though. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I forgot to tell you , your poem was great. [This message has been edited by Smore (edited 02-15-2000).] |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
stephani: i know this probably isn't what you wanted or needed to hear, but perhaps it will do some good: MEN ARE PIGS myself included... (just remember than and you should be okay) sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Jerome is right. But I'm the exception! *smile* =) "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Thanks everyone, we are THROUGH for good now. I NOW know after a year and 2 months that men are truly PIGS, Thanks for reminding me though Jerome!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
jerome i'm gonna have to go against you with that popular stereotype, men are not pigs, all those insanely horrible actions that are perpetrated against women by members of are sex are not done by MEN but rather little boys who think they are men, henceforth giving those who attempt to live virtously a bad name...just thought i'ld clear that up rich-pa |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
You're poem is really nice, but cheer up! Some guys aren't worth it at all. They aren't even worth a single tear I tell ya! But someday you'll find the one how is worth it. Good luck and yah Jerome is right...men are pigs! Well or maybe rich-pa was right, it's little boys that make men have such a bad name. I don't know.....overall they really aren't worth it. Keep smilin Salma |
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